This is a blog hop. The object is to write eight sentences from your writing, published or unpublished, for the other participants to critique (as well as anyone else who wants to comment of course). This is a snippet from my WIP, The Milk Carton Murders.
|A book blurb for the Milk Carton Murders can be found on this page.|
Herbert Wilde squatted down alongside the CSI waiting for further instructions.
“Well this is it gentleman," said Pepper, “you ready?”
It was a question that didn’t require an answer.
Pepper lifted the coffin lid.
“Shit,” Dave said.
“I ditto that,” said Sheriff Nazzaro.
The first thing everyone noticed was the clipped section of another milk carton pinned to what seemed to be another female skeleton.
The piece of milk carton that Dave could clearly see read, MISSING April 8, 1990, from Albany, NY, Lisa Appleton.
The link to the other Weekend Writing Warriors is here.