Twenty-five-year-old Margie Webster’s body was found along a hedgerow between two farm fields—a place where she would have no reason to be. |
“So, the murder weapon you think, Herb?” asked Clayton, with a tilt of his head towards the log.
“I’m not guessing on that one until I get her back to the morgue,” said Herb, “and not until your forensic guys have that adze removed. No mistaking who she is though.”
“Nope. Jack Webster’s daughter,” said Clayton, “worked up at McCormick’s boat rental last I heard. Quiet girl--what do make of the clothes?”
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Welcome back to posting, Cindy! :-)
ReplyDeleteWhat a way to start a story! I could see it all. Very familiar things mentioned in the snippet...
Hi Cindy! Thanks for sharing. I really like your dialogue. I can actually hear the clipped phrases and part sentences that pass between people who have known or worked together for a long time. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteI wonder what's so special about her clothes. I guess I'll have to keep reading to find out.
ReplyDeleteYay another story! Although you gotta let me know when Milk Carton is published, because I want the first copy!
ReplyDeleteThis is a great opening for the new story. Glad to see another story with some of the same characters, I do like the people you created for Milk Carton. Hope you pick up from here next week :-D
Wonderful beginning with the typical short speak of police. So sad about the dead daughter
ReplyDeleteIt is about time right? Now that my non-fiction book is off to the publisher its time for some murder mystery fun!
ReplyDeleteOh what the heck is this girl doing out here? Shoot. And yes, what's special about her clothing? You have me curiouser and curiouser : )
ReplyDeleteOh, I remember that polka dot scarf. :)
ReplyDeleteAlways lovely to have a post from you to read, such smooth prose, even as you're telling us the most tragic stories! Intriguing excerpt as always...
ReplyDeleteThat scarf is a creepy detail . . . Reminds me of a horror film where they don't seem dead, and they get jostled and the head falls off!
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