My vision of Lamont, the town of The Milk Carton Murders (Photo is really Bastrop, TX, although my book is set in western NY State.) |
And now the snippet:
“Samantha put something inside the stuffed dog at some point, between the back stitches—a piece of balsa wood. We figure it survived because it was surrounded by fiber fill, basically encased in plastic.”
“Balsa wood? That’s what my pine wood derby car was made out of.”
“And when did you make that?”
“It was pretty soon after she came to us—May or June, but why do that?"
Pepper looked him straight in the eye, “Because it was a soft wood to carve into I imagine. She wanted to leave us a message, Dave; for the person she hoped someday would find her.”
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I wonder what it said? Don't you hate that?
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When
three small coffins are unearthed near the Wiscoy Creek during a
routine dredging operation, it’s the last thing DAVE ROBERTSON, of the Lamont Weekly Times, expected. Pinned to the skeleton’s clothing are pictures from milk cartons of missing girls.
BLURB:
Dave is stunned to find that one of the girls is Sally―a foster child his parents had cared for through the Friends of Foster Families (FFF) program. Cold case files reveal the girls disappeared over 20 years ago. Knowing his house was the last place he saw Sally alive, he can’t help but suspect his dad.
How can he write the biggest story of his career if his father turns out to be the killer? If the voice in his head would shut up and let him remember, he might figure it out before he loses his mind and his dad is charged with murder.
Full blurb and snippet recap here.
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Oh my God, what a great little twist! Write faster, Cindy! I can hardly wait to read this. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Teresa.:) I'm actually in editing mode, and I want to change the ending.
DeleteHi Cindy; I remember this story; so many plot twists and this one is especially intriguing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Debbie. I'm glad it's memorable!
Deletehahaha, I do hate that! But of course that's what makes great mysteries, and this one absolutely qualifies. I think about this story during the week, so I'd say you have a gripping tale here. I've been invested in this story from the beginning!
ReplyDeleteHow kind of you to say. Hopefully it won't e too much longer until you can read the whole thing.
DeleteOh goodness...what message did she leave? You are a tiny bit cruel Cindy...leaving us hanging like this!
ReplyDeleteBravo, Cindy. This snippet is so interesting and filled with mystery. The poor thing left a message in her stuffed dog. Wow. Just wow.
ReplyDeleteYou are so mean to leave us hanging like this. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteI've ben waiting to read this whole story for EVER, Cindy! No pressure . . . but edit faster! :)
ReplyDeleteThat's perfectly creepy, Cindy. :D This is such a great story.
ReplyDeleteThat's really sad :( The little girl hung on to a shred of hope, but in the end it didn't make a difference ;___; I like crime shows like Law and Order: SVU. I like it so much I've watched all 300+ episodes several times XD Curious what it said, but I'm a bit afraid it's going to break my heart :$
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing sad tale and in your hands, the story comes alive. You've left us with a cliff hanger. Thanks a bunch.
ReplyDeleteBalsa wood in a pine wood derby?
ReplyDeleteYes, it's a Boy Scout thing.
DeleteI love this story (well it's sad of course, but a terrifically well crafted mystery), glad to see snippets from it return. Now I'm totally intrigued as to what message the little girl left...excellent excerpt.
ReplyDeleteThat's a great piece of prose... it leaves so many places open to you for exploring, plus reveals important stuff at the same time.
ReplyDeleteI wonder what it says too but I'm not sure piper would let Dave hang like you are letting us haha.
ReplyDeleteBy the way, from a computer with firefox your post appears at the very bottom of the page with all the widgets listed at the top.
Thanks Linda, I'm playing with templates and obviously that one wasn't working well. :)
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